Refine presentation flow and speaker notes

PROJECT_STATE.md

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 # ThothII — Project State
 
-Last updated: 2026-09-24 (slide 11 PNG numbering aligned with popups).
+Last updated: 2026-09-24 (11-slide deck, consolidated project opening and final contacts).
 
 This file is the short operational snapshot. Stable commands and the architecture mental model
 live in `AGENTS.md`; current design and runtime contracts live under `docs/architecture/`,
@@ -14,18 +14,42 @@ requirements as mandatory; do not replace the running server stack in place.
 
 ## Presentation publishing
 
+The deck now has 11 slides. The cover remains; “Where we started” is folded into
+“What we wanted to build”, now slide 2. Its speaker notes open with the four goals,
+and its existing popups include the disconnected sources and missing capabilities.
+Speaker notes now read as continuous prose without titles. On slide 2 and slides
+7–10, parenthesized cues identify the corresponding popup button at the start of
+its paragraph or dedicated popup text. The closing slide has no popup cues.
+The console reading area also omits slide and popup headings; popup controls
+remain below the preview. Edits preserve the content and keep the spoken text close
+to its previous length; actual delivery time still depends on rehearsal. The former
+penultimate “One datamart — many questions answered” slide is removed. The ThothII
+tour leads directly to “Thank you”, with both contact emails in bold 32px type.
+
+Slide 8 now has four popups: Home page, Patient data (original PNG 3),
+Dashboard catalogue (PNG 6), and Brugada dashboard (PNG 7), numbered 1–4.
+Each has dedicated presenter notes; the opening explains the portal's breadth,
+the limited time, and Marco and Sara's availability for an in-person or remote
+follow-up. The overview uses a two-by-two grid; unused PNGs remain on disk.
+
 Presentation PNG source (user instruction, 2026-09-23): all PNGs to import come from
 `/Users/mp/Desktop/ScreenshotPresentation/ThothIIScreens/`. This is the verified on-disk
 path the user refers to as `desktop/screenshot/presentation/thothIIscreens`.
 Copy supplied files unchanged into `presentation/deck/screenshots/thothii/`, preserving
-their embedded annotations. The 12 slide 11 PNGs are numbered `01` through `12` in
-popup order, in both the source folder and the deck. The first popup uses
+their embedded annotations. The 12 source PNGs retain their `01` through `12` filenames.
+The shortened slide 10 tour uses PNGs 01, 02, 05, 07, 08 and 09, numbered 1–6
+in the interface; unused images remain on disk. The 284-word presenter script
+covers all eight phases, explicitly introduces Human in the Loop, and includes
+the invitation to a longer presentation at the conference or remotely.
+The planned duration is 2:50, to be confirmed by rehearsal.
+Slide 11 prominently displays Marco Pancotti's and Sara Paratico's email addresses.
+Local preview uses `python3 -m http.server 8000 --bind 127.0.0.1 --directory presentation`.
+The first popup uses
 `01-StartingPoint.png`; popup 2 uses `02-Disambiguation01.png`. Refresh the image
 cache version when replacing a PNG. During the current editing session, refresh both
 operational browser windows after every modification, as explicitly requested.
-Popup 3 uses `03-DisambiguationFinal.png`, popup 4 uses `04-SchemaLinking01.png`,
-and popup 5 uses `05-CloseSchemaLinking.png`. Popups 6–12 are CTE planning, CTE 1,
-Final SQL, Datamart, Saving memory, Final step, and Back to start.
+Popup 3 uses `05-CloseSchemaLinking.png`, popup 4 uses `07-CTE01.png`,
+popup 5 uses `08-FinalSQL.png`, and popup 6 uses `09-DatamartProduction.png`.
 The HTML references PNGs by relative URL: they are external static assets, not
 compiled or embedded. Keep `presentation/deck/screenshots/thothii/` with the deck;
 the Desktop source folder is not a runtime dependency.